""Then you tell me it's over, it's the moment I dread".... nicely done, simple but effective as well..
" Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Boom" by rondant
"i like the last line best.. it perfectly ends your poem here.. open and proud.. well done" Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Moon Beams" by rondant
"yes this was very touching, i'm sorry about .. how it is.. *hugs you*.. welcome to dp, hope to read more work soon :D" Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "My Grandmother" by rondant
