"Love the second stanza particularly.
And the last line was a beautiful finish. Melancholic. Perfect rhythm. " Posted by drasticdaydreams on "Now I lay me..." by Dommi
"Perhaps we shouldn't take it all too seriously, but it can be rather easy to. I'm not saying it doesn't make it worth it, Thanks for comment :) " Posted by drasticdaydreams on "Sweet Nothings " by drasticdaydreams
"This is somewhat glorious :)
Spelling error in the first paragraph though, sean *seen ?
Really enjoyed this poem, seems to be a lighthearted tale of doom. Quite different. " Posted by drasticdaydreams on "Dragon With A Microwave Hand " by gearhead