Comments by Malice In Wonderland
- "it gave it almost a repetetive aura, to where it seemed you knew what you wanted to say, but didn't no how to say it...like you weren't really feeling this(the write).but like I said, it's a good start:)"
Posted by Malice In Wonderland on "My Pain" by nightshade
- "the third and the last line were my faves..while it's a good start, it seemed like the rhyme took away from it and made you repress what you wanted to get out to make it rhyme correctly..."
Posted by Malice In Wonderland on "My Pain" by nightshade
