Comments by Numbers Peppelini

  • "Very hot and steamy write...The way it reads, there is just enough, subtleness in it to make it provoking. I almost felt as if I was living in a "Lolita" scene, you know, hot sweltering day, driving up to some old desolate motel, wiping the gritty dust from from my neck with a handkerchief, while "Lolita playfully waited in the doorway for me, swiping the sweat off her ice cream cone, with delicious lashing licks of promise, like crushed velvet against her form.....While symphonies of bliss play in the halls. Bravo young lady!!!"
    Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Crescendo Me" by poe_lover28
  • "What is the meaning to that which is left when we come to realize, perhaps much too late, we were merely just two parallels, that never really had a chance of coming together? I suppose it is meant, we stay as close as we can, together, beneath......r a i n"
    Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Beneath...r a i n" by poe_lover28
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