Comments by Jonas
- "this tropicalsnowstorm guy tends to show up right before me and say what i intended to say thus forcing me to attempt to be creative in order not to appear mundane. fuck that: "& you just sleep" perfect final line to an introspective narrative that is challenging but enriching to identify with."
Posted by Jonas on "Hieroglyphics in the east gateway: sleep" by slow.burn.star
- "the last three lines cut to the center of this piece... moved enough to leave these little words - jonas"
Posted by Jonas on "leatherette" by slow.burn.star
- "i loved a girl, polly, polly ethlene, she was everything to me and everything all at once, until her plastic pieces broke. love the love/plastic play. forlorn poetry, the perfect 4am find."
Posted by Jonas on "- Plastic Injection Molded -" by slow.burn.star
