Comments by Mute Serenade

"midnight tries to chase us... oh... i'm glad i stumbled into your work... facefirst, smashing my head on your reality smiling at the salt. Sue Zen"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Love Poem for the Hopeless" by Invader Lyn

"flickering forgetfulness...a step behind... (but no one stays for the credits anyway)... this is the spiral... damn is it good. Sue Zen"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Heart-Shaped Clock" by Invader Lyn

"reminds me of a fire i had... my pages danced with leaves, my thought evaporated into air... that was it. gone. i like it... good write, nice form,(at first i feared this was going to be a suicide note from the title, never know what to expect...) Sue"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "The Last Page" by Invader Lyn