Comments by Mute Serenade
- "the last stanza... you're never chained into a work... never... you throw it around like a new lover being taught by first touch... at your whim... and loving it. sculpture kirk, sculpture. Sue"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "dollarblind" by capt_funguy
- "your talent exceeds anywords i could fathom.... so sexy/sorrowfilled line.. that was peach. The dead lip lingo stanza was screaming. if i could only formulate the sentences... Sue Zen"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "errors in compassion" by capt_funguy
- "Kirkus Cornelius of daylight wrenching persuasions... i want to quote the entire fucking thing. But the cotton gets me the most.. oh kirk... insanely worth much of a wait... wonderously swell... Sue Zen"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "frigate farrow" by capt_funguy
