Comments by nightshade
- "I used to do some welding back when I was about 15 - 18 (yes it was shop class but still welding) That experience made this poem all the more real for me.
I must say your word choices and your style really gave this poem a drive and pull of it's very own. Leaving a horrible empty feeling in the pit of my being at the end."
Posted by nightshade on "As welders cry." by Iwas
- "This had a serious collision at the end. I really enjoy poetry that makes me feel something. However the hurt and pain in this make one happy to be alive and breathing. I am also sorry for your loss."
Posted by nightshade on "Dust settles silent" by Iwas
