Comments by flying_fox
- "gift for vivid description and taking the reader on a journey of... terror...sadness...atrocity... is astounding. For the record though, I LOVED the stanza about Pollock. Brilliant."
Posted by flying_fox on "zebra stripes and herd logic" by capt_funguy
- "with in-your-face imagery. I feel kind of smacked about afte reading this, like you've taken me by the shoulders and shaken me to realise what a filthy place we live in.. yet there is definite beauty in these words."
Posted by flying_fox on "born of" by capt_funguy
- "Ok... I'm now back and even though alert I am still struggling to make sense of my busy brain afte reading this. I feel... dirty? Depressed? I'm really not sure. This wa sa disturbing write"
Posted by flying_fox on "born of" by capt_funguy
- "okay it's 1.30am and I'm trying to digest this, but I know I can't do it justice now. So, I'll just say, THANK DOG YOU'RE BACK and come back myself at a time of less sleepiness to comment. :)"
Posted by flying_fox on "born of" by capt_funguy
- "The image of the "natural environment" changes so dramatically in the frist two stanzas. great words, again. FF"
Posted by flying_fox on "dollarblind" by capt_funguy
- "Damn Capt'n. You've done it again...pure brilliance. "dead lip lingo turns to a tight lid weep"...magnificent rhythm, gorgeous imagery. Again you tackle things I can only dream of. FF
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Posted by flying_fox on "errors in compassion" by capt_funguy
