Comments by soul_versing
- "Faceless beings concocted into what others seek and desire us to become. Vivid imagery and well structured. Each stanza built up a strong intensity to reveal the wickedness in this world. Such a gifted poet♥ -Bows"
Posted by soul_versing on "The Cocktail Party" by saltyman65
- "Unmasked beauty right before all to see, and yet we're still blinded. The best works always go unnoticed...what a shame. Beautiful piece full of insight. Guess it's true then,, "beauty is in the eye of the beholder" unknown- bows-"
Posted by soul_versing on "The simple things" by saltyman65
- "Omg, this delivered goosebumps on my arms and cold chills down my imperfect spine. I wish for once in my life to be this meaningful/perfect in the eyes of my former lover. Majestic tantalizing perfection and... This leaves my lungs gasping for air. You, sir, just wowed me out of words. .amazed."
Posted by soul_versing on "Innards" by saltyman65
- "Well hell... I've had fears while making a trip to tinkle. I've even caught myself running, even now in my age. Haha! I enjoyed this. TG-"
Posted by soul_versing on "The Bathroom" by saltyman65
- "I love the arranged style of the text. I think that it safer to not let your guard down, even though, it's difficult to face the unbearable at times. Nice piece of poetry. Bows-"
Posted by soul_versing on "waiting for action…….." by saltyman65
