Comments by soul_versing
- "I cannot recall ever dismantling any of my dolls,, come to think of it...I don't recall having any... I was an unorthodox child of sort, really. Had an imagination and used it to write instead of physical play. I've got to say that this is a pretty intense read,, and I particularly love the mini flashback you jolted my brain into, which was unexpected. You have an knack for storytelling and an imagination the is unique; however, what draws me into the writer is the attention to detail. I would absolutely love more detail. I love the story, but was waiting a more dramatic climax. I say... Great piece, sir, and write on! Bows-Â "
Posted by soul_versing on "Baby Doll" by darkheartmagic
