Comments by Solace

  • "But by god this is a fistful of maggots that recieves a treatment reverential almost - with enormous pace and rapidity - without a jot of compromise, ripped apart and shut down...Viewpoint wrenched aside to see the faces staring back at you..."
    Posted by Solace on "lunghaus" by capt_funguy
  • "this is what alone is. And it looks disgusting and sickly - strangely enough - even ridiculously enough beautiful, and i'm not sure if thats simply because you expressed it so nakedly. Like trying to find sentiment in a genetics - I don't think its there"
    Posted by Solace on "lunghaus" by capt_funguy
  • "And it truly feels like you make use of it, like your doing something incredibly central - unspeakably important - bloated bag of face staring back at us. This is the mirror darkly, but thats a wrong designation its looking out any window anywhere..."
    Posted by Solace on "lunghaus" by capt_funguy
  • "Monumental - but you'll never see a monument to it - practical wisdom is gibberish but in your hands it becomes a handbook for effective communication "If literature can't find a new way to cook chickpeas then whats the use of it?""
    Posted by Solace on "lunghaus" by capt_funguy
  • "I'd rather be in your kitchen at any time, a bottle of something cheap and unimportant - a low sussurus of some old music - just minds unwinding themselves out..."
    Posted by Solace on "gold bars and cotton sheets" by capt_funguy
  • "Nothing will take that moment away, and each to his own retribution - to his judiciary calculated cost and renumeration. Privilege is preferable to poverty and piracy - but finds itself in the end as pitiful..."
    Posted by Solace on "gold bars and cotton sheets" by capt_funguy
  • "You are a tooth puller, in your own way, but you're pulling your own out - it takes a damn sight more effort to do that and spit it out like this. Some voices are barely audible, but yours is some new ancient - some leviathan"
    Posted by Solace on "gold bars and cotton sheets" by capt_funguy
  • "Mayhap one day i'll do the same of this about the 90's with my own perspective and it will seem similar...its amazing how similar other lives can seem and yet so far apart..."
    Posted by Solace on "zebra stripes and herd logic" by capt_funguy
  • "i'm not sure if there are any punchlines, not sure if its just me reacting to things that i've never seen, never experienced, but just the same i know them as if they were mine"
    Posted by Solace on "zebra stripes and herd logic" by capt_funguy
  • "I love it, I love all your work, the anecdotes of a bygone era, its beautiful...its as if i can hear your voice, one of those old story tellers who talk and talk, but you have to listen for the punchline"
    Posted by Solace on "zebra stripes and herd logic" by capt_funguy
  • "They're never greaseless, cause the hands that scrub away are covered in the grime, smothering everything, like midas with filth instead of gold...Once more you sputter brilliance like a lighthouse guiding the ships in..."
    Posted by Solace on "born of" by capt_funguy
  • "We are factory bred no less, little more than the base machines we work, chunk by chunk working day, generic production schemes...this is not life, this is not living...i wonder if i can remember what was, realise what is"
    Posted by Solace on "born of" by capt_funguy
  • "Creations that are nothing, that hold no relvenace, that are just form.seeing is believing, seeing is knowing, seeing is being fucked over by the illusory."
    Posted by Solace on "born of" by capt_funguy
  • "The broken, the simplistic, the horribly complex...Gaping meatholes waiting to lap up the condensed form of garish particles...the bleak knowledge that we are born, into a world that dies the same way..."
    Posted by Solace on "born of" by capt_funguy
  • "Sometimes it takes sitting still and just listening to hear the hypocrisy, to hear the screaming...Too much pixellated death, desensitization to horror, when a mother and a child means nothing more than their affiliation..."
    Posted by Solace on "intentionalism" by capt_funguy
  • "Faith bombs drop filled with prayers on shanty towns...Dragonflies become dragons when provoked...Blame passes around like a joint, but one of us isn't smoking anything but the wisp from a gun barrel..."
    Posted by Solace on "intentionalism" by capt_funguy
  • "Everything is a potential threat man, don't your read the papers? The dragonfly was going nuclear on us, could see it in its eyes...Excuses, excuses, excuses...Curiosity killed the cat and the cats family will NEVER forgive..."
    Posted by Solace on "intentionalism" by capt_funguy
  • ""He doesn't ask with words / and can't patiently wait for answers" Your subtle liek a knife in the back, wham bam thank you mam, no fucking around with you, no sir, i like my meat rare and without gravy..."
    Posted by Solace on "intentionalism" by capt_funguy
  • "You are the Blake of our age, the metaphorical misanthrope...Every literature class should get to read this, every modern man should fill his mind with these concepts..."
    Posted by Solace on "intentionalism" by capt_funguy
  • "I show the dollar to the beggar... Goddamn freakishly awesome!Almost as if you stole my thoughts on that one... stark lumens...Brilliance...i need not say more..."
    Posted by Solace on "frigate farrow" by capt_funguy
  • "but without the losses...only gains to garner, like a pocketful of gold screaming invest invest invest...Each conglomeration makes a new amount in and of itself..."
    Posted by Solace on "frigate farrow" by capt_funguy
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