Comments by Alanarchy

  • ""I never scream..." that section got me. Great job. Hey, maybe I'm being presumptious, but did you leave an "r" out of your title? anyway, very expressive."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "See through me" by BeautifullyRuined
  • "Title instantly made me think of Pearl Necklace, by zz top. haha. This was great. The donut metaphor was unusual, but for some reason, I liked it, and I think maybe just because it was unusual. anyway, good work."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "White knuckled necklace" by BeautifullyRuined
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