Comments by purr_verse
- "That was the line i was going to quote also... :) beautiful indeed; and i like that i did not see the conclusion coming... the final stanza is especially lovely."
Posted by purr_verse on "1st & last..." by Dayer
- "there are several very sad and powerful moments in this piece; good flow, too, and i really like the formatting of the "So under the covers..." quartet of lines. fine write. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "Dark Angel - Part Two" by Dayer
- "great closing line particularly; and subliminals lie in the beginning of every line... :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "Subliminal" by Dayer
