Comments by purr_verse
- ""You don’t slither, you collide" - this is great! also love the opening line a lot... Nice inner rhythm/rhyme in this piece; several syllabic and alliterative clevernesses also that appealed to me... lovely. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "Middle Syndromes" by Jadednoir
- "this is great! many excellent lines but i'm going to single out "And you encourage me to compose a dream based
on vanity" because that's just supergreat... :) i could get lost in these words repeatedly. fine write."
Posted by purr_verse on "Persist and anxiety" by Jadednoir
- "my mushroom experience (yes, only one) had me trapped inside a giant zucchini flying at warpspeeds through purpled plains and vistas. (Was actually on a bus.) nice work; i've seen some of this world too. :) purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "Phallangies Extremities" by Jadednoir
- "The penultimate stanza is marvellous. otherwise, for my comments, i'll echo bakkhus. great work. purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "Undone" by Jadednoir
