Comments by MercyRain

  • "i press.... echoes reaching through almost a decade now to still haunt... in the meaning? in the connection? which haunts more? the futility of sending messages back in time? I dunno... I miss you though... :/"
    Posted by MercyRain on "i press..." by apophenia
  • "Ah, my dear... i miss the banter, the pushing boundaries... i hope you are making the universe treat you well"
    Posted by MercyRain on "i press..." by apophenia
  • "foreign and obtuse... sometimes the layers are self-referential to themselves, sometimes not... just that -- a fractal... yeah, that describes it best... fractal"
    Posted by MercyRain on "the exploding vagina world" by apophenia
  • "it is one of the reasons why i love your works so... depth and layers... sometimes conscious, sometimes not... sometimes i might see things intended, sometimes something completely foreigh"
    Posted by MercyRain on "the exploding vagina world" by apophenia
  • "objective comments... i guess kinda like it feels like everything should all fit into some neat little logical space, but somehow each attempt is somehow lacking"
    Posted by MercyRain on "the exploding vagina world" by apophenia
  • "but i don't see this as any great epiphany either... too much intellectual/logical base rather than emotional... i guess more like intellectual wonder at unexpected similarities"
    Posted by MercyRain on "the exploding vagina world" by apophenia
  • "the kind of feminine spirituality, but largely because you describe it as dystopia... i wouldn't expect that strong a description of strictly gender, i would guess more of the metaphysical"
    Posted by MercyRain on "the exploding vagina world" by apophenia
  • "in debate whether to read into this as a kind of moment of doubt/awareness into gender or more mystical themes... hard to describe... but feels like a vague moment anyway... i think i'd tend towards"
    Posted by MercyRain on "the exploding vagina world" by apophenia
  • "not that there's anything wrong with ensler, just the clones tend to lack novelty... anyway, this was all before loading the page & seeing who the author is... "
    Posted by MercyRain on "the exploding vagina world" by apophenia
  • "when i saw the title in the new works... i was cringing, fearful of another ensler clone so popular among femi-poets, at least on the local scene, these days"
    Posted by MercyRain on "the exploding vagina world" by apophenia
  • "but to something inside the writer, the reader... anyone who delves into this madness"
    Posted by MercyRain on "Untitled" by apophenia
  • "do you find? the additional phrases, the altered lines... the obvious... but i think you refer to something much more ambiguous then a few minor alterations to this piece"
    Posted by MercyRain on "Untitled" by apophenia
  • "i can't help but hear music with this... a kind of industrial trance... leaether strip-ish... this is neat... exactly what it claims to be, yet despite giving itself up, still beautifully effective"
    Posted by MercyRain on "Untitled" by apophenia
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