Comments by MercyRain
- "which are most effective with an order of rhythm & rhyme, and even slogans to rally around"
Posted by MercyRain on "Revolution." by sole
- "of course, a focus on revolution could necessitate some playing around with atonal rhythm or whatnot, but in this case, i don't think as appropriate... you are trying to inspire via an anthem"
Posted by MercyRain on "Revolution." by sole
- "as heavily as this poem utililzes rhyme, the lack of a set pattern or rhythm seems to be a detriment to what could be a much more forceful poem"
Posted by MercyRain on "Revolution." by sole
- "yes, i can agree with a lot of the comments here about this being a strangely uplifting piece for DP, without getting into the preachy side or buttery side of things, but"
Posted by MercyRain on "Revolution." by sole
