Comments by stormtalk
- "On a small grammatical note, those "it's"'s should all be "its." Other than that... not bad at all. Not my favorite of yours, either, but still better than the average write. Who's M?"
Posted by stormtalk on "Forbidden" by Sky Singer
- "I like the short-lined, double-spaced style you often write with, it's very easy and light to read, and it allows for your heavy content to show through. This poem hasn't had a tenth of the attention it deserves - great job."
Posted by stormtalk on "trichloromethane kisses" by Sky Singer
