Comments by Awesomeshiloh
- "thanks, and you couldn't be more right. i wrote it initially for it to be printed in the church handout for the funeral. :) i'm also waiting for the next time the poetry course on this site is offered, so i can better form my thoughts into written word. "
Posted by Awesomeshiloh on "Broken Opiate Heart" by Awesomeshiloh
- "thanks for the feedback, any tips or critisism helps. i never had any formal training and my poetry knowledge doesn't extend much past making it rhyme, lol. Solipsist was actually the first book of Rollins that i read in the pen. my favorite of his is the Mechanik"
Posted by Awesomeshiloh on "Thoughts from a cell 1" by Awesomeshiloh
- "thanks for the comments. my bad on the all caps, its just how write stuff out free hand. wasn't really trying to emphasize the poem, but thanks again for any input"
Posted by Awesomeshiloh on "Empty Life" by Awesomeshiloh
