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Broken Opiate Heart
By Awesomeshiloh
I never realized that my life would end
That day
But
I know I'm only one syringe
From ending all my pain
I
don't think that I can live this way
It's just to hard
Maybe I'll just end my life today
With a needle in my vein
My last goodbye
With bloodshot, pin-prick eyes
I'm lying
on my back
Wishing that I could still be
With a needle in my
vein
Still alive
I don't wanna die
I~I~I~
Wish you
were still here with me
I never thought that I'd turn into this
Dope fiend
But there's nothing that I want to miss
So I just try to sing
Living now is what is killing me
I wanna die
Dieing's my new beginning
To just see in
your eyes
My last goodbye
With bloodshot, pin-prick
eyes
I'm lying on my back
Wishing that I could still be
With
a needle in my vein
Still alive
I just wanna die
I~I~I~
Wish you were still here with me
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Copyright 2012 Awesomeshiloh
Published on Tuesday, July 10, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
I wrote this song to the tune of "pain" by jimmy eats world. I also wrote it right after I buried my best friend from a heroin OD and my fiance from a brain anuerysm just 6 months apart and just being only 7months out of prison.Comments on "Broken Opiate Heart"
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A former member wrote:
So real and so hard to accept that feeling..
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On Tuesday, July 10, 2012, Feral
(87)
wrote:
Your combination of phrases describes the situation... but I'm not sensing the desperation, pain, or bitterness. The repetition of simple words gives this a definite layman feel, but don't be afraid to go all-out with emotional rage. It seems like you're dulling it down to be.. polite, almost. Also, watch the spelling errors.
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On Tuesday, July 10, 2012, Awesomeshiloh
(5) wrote:
thanks, and you couldn't be more right. i wrote it initially for it to be printed in the church handout for the funeral. :) i'm also waiting for the next time the poetry course on this site is offered, so i can better form my thoughts into written word.
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