Comments by Magdalena

  • "Missing you little lady and your captivating writing. I keep a candle in the window and light it when it is dark. "
    Posted by Magdalena on "excruciating" by anaksunamun
  • "I came in just to comment on this captivating piece of writing... I lay in my bed and at times I would feel the cold pierce my pores and the brush of breath against my hair, in my alone-ness. I had a dream once that I have to tell you about.. I connected with your wonderful writing my beautiful friend. "
    Posted by Magdalena on "pallor" by anaksunamun
  • "The first line in this instantly brought to mind all the little blue lights washed up on the shore of beaches, they are "bioluminescent bacteria" and such a beautiful sight... the rest of your piece, how you describe smell. Absolutely wonderful. :) Take good care beautiful lady. "
    Posted by Magdalena on "occultation." by anaksunamun
  • "His problem is with himself ana, I would take no notice.... Thought provoking indeed, I often wonder about perception and maybe none of us see anything exactly the same, could never imagine being without colour but I do find black and white beautiful too... Shine on lovely lady. :) "
    Posted by Magdalena on "baal." by anaksunamun
  • "Sensually delicate and tenderness so beautiful and the ache of being out of reach, all felt in this wonderful piece beautiful lady. :)"
    Posted by Magdalena on "jupiter" by anaksunamun
  • "This is so beautifully sad, to split the sea speaks of much love.. Wonderful words ana. :)"
    Posted by Magdalena on "_In" by anaksunamun
  • "I imagine a day would be loud with all of that noise. I love how I can silence my mind with my own tenacity and fill it with wonder and hallucinogens play no part in it. That is why, maybe.... Thought provoking and beautiful, lovely lady :)"
    Posted by Magdalena on "teddybears." by anaksunamun
  • "A beautiful concept in the first few lines and a magical and dreamy quality throughout. Your pieces always take me out of this world and to another place Ana... :)"
    Posted by Magdalena on "Electricity is Ahrimanic." by anaksunamun
  • " Such a powerful light.. Always so graceful with a lingering sadness felt. I read book after and sometimes, the way you write takes me to the places some of those books do.... Enchanting. :) "
    Posted by Magdalena on "167/99 ." by anaksunamun
  • "And this is how I have believed it for a long time, Our bodies are the host our spirit resides in and our conscious is not hard wired to our brain, it is outside of us like an aura and never dies.... You put it beautifully. There is so much more to us than flesh and bone.. Captivating piece. :)"
    Posted by Magdalena on "tinsel." by anaksunamun
  • "There is nothing like sharing the mundane things in life and attaching them to a beautiful thing.... I imagine the fountain is a captivating inspiration.... Wonderful :)"
    Posted by Magdalena on "8.20 an hour " by anaksunamun
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