Comments by SilentStalker

"...again, not bad, but that's one thing you can work on, if you want to, that is...oh, and as far as content...I find nothing wrong with that... ;)"
Posted by SilentStalker on "...Plastic is the New Skin.." by JiNx

"...from my standard of writing, the rhyming was truly awesome; ABAB is hard enough to pull off and sound good at it...otherwise, the structure of it was kind of lacking...a rhyme without meter is like a meter without rhyme..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "...Plastic is the New Skin.." by JiNx