"...apologies...Matt has us older members traumatized by the previous 256 character count limit of comments; it's a habit to cut my comments off around that length by nature now, unless I truly get carried away..." Posted by SilentStalker on "Killing You Was The Solution To My Misery" by Dark Goth
"...I think it's obvious the title would draw someone like me in; and the use of it as the closing line is exceptional; just remember to make the poem impact just as good, if not better, than the closing line, in such a case..." Posted by SilentStalker on "Killing You Was The Solution To My Misery" by Dark Goth
"...as far as content, it sets the stage kinda nicely, but a lot of it seems forced , erratic, ans sometimes repetitive, and it seemed as if you were torn between using a rhyme scheme and going free verse..." Posted by SilentStalker on "Killing You Was The Solution To My Misery" by Dark Goth
"...funny; I never actually set a numerical goal; I just kept going until I ran out of ideas...maybe that might be a better approach, but don't let me sway you from whatever it is you're trying to prove..." Posted by SilentStalker on "Killing You Was The Solution To My Misery" by Dark Goth