Comments by SilentStalker
- "...and sadly, that still isn't a winning example...I lean too much on structure; I want it to at least 'sound' creative, which makes it work better than a true bad attempt...but I'm not here to say you don't deserve the win; I'm merely stating that this is 'not' a shit write...it's quite the opposite, in all hilarity... ;)"
Posted by SilentStalker on "Penguin Feathers" by Echoes of Orpheus
- "...fido, watching Dido, singing credo, in a speedo, and the mic is, looking like-is, a banana on the floor...Wonka, selling Tonka, on the trailer, of a whaler, made of plastic, so fantastic, each a dollar-ninety-four..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "Penguin Feathers" by Echoes of Orpheus
- "...'shit-poem' contests are hard to those that actually put thought into their writes...if you need to put a catch onto your writes to make sure people know it's yours, you've already done something creative with the write, and already have a good point on your side. it has to pretty much attempt to be good, but horribly fail at it...which fortunately, not many people can accomplish... :P"
Posted by SilentStalker on "Penguin Feathers" by Echoes of Orpheus
- "...what I'm getting at is, good writers just can't easily write shit poetry (exception is 'I feel emotion', though that was genius for the intent); it's not in our blood...we flop every now and then, but it's not a cascade failure...the cascade failures surprisingly never attempt to enter contests like this, unfortunately... :P"
Posted by SilentStalker on "Penguin Feathers" by Echoes of Orpheus
- "...you know, pieces like these aren't true entries for contests as such; freeverse like this is the work of a master hand, most of the time...sure, not much fit together, but it didn't have to...it just worked..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "Penguin Feathers" by Echoes of Orpheus
