Comments by dwells
- "Outstanding extended metaphor B and the weakness of the flesh is a temptation beyond all others, when nature calls...
Tastefully executed; don't break a tooth :)
Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Candy apple eyes" by beamish
- "Liked the titular wordplay B and sounds like an excellent childhood friend (we could do worse). Nicely done characterization of an ideal that might forever remain elusive - safer that way. Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "She's in my mind " by beamish
- "A beautiful rendering of hidden beauty Beamish. Hoping she reads this and perks up. Best of luck and there is salvation in the noble heart. Cheers and congrats! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "My little gutter girl" by beamish
