Comments by Lydia Jade
- "Very unique, the end was really what made this piece. Very beautiful and thoughtful. Don't be offended please because it doesn't take away from the work but there are spelling errors. Quick spellchecker would fix you up."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "It's Empty Here" by Abberant
- "Unrequited love, the most classic of all poetry subject matter. In fact I think it may be a requirement to qualify as a poet. I would tell you that time heals these wounds, and I would be right, bit nobody ever wants to hear that. Good job"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Soul died today" by DemonsFire777
- "Really great rhyme scheme. You stuck to it perfectly throughout without sacrificing message or forcing a rhyme."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Graffiti" by Ladyhawke
- "Lol I used to do writing excersizes like this a lot when I'd run out of things to write about. They are fun. Good job"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "...Chatter " by SolApathy
- "Your discriptors leaven this poem reading silkily if that is even a word. Intentionally or not, it adds a depth to this "
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Doubts creep in" by Drayvinio
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