Comments by MikeShank1989
- ""Never one taken with growing pains
stunted stalks wrapping round
thruway trackmark trains
their leaves dew-kissing trap house floors as
predicted
long before the tenants were evicted"
That first stanza was fire and set a phenomenal tone for the piece. Thanks for the recommendation. Well written! "
Posted by MikeShank1989 on ""Krissy"" by King_Crazy_Dave