Comments by Virgils Vigil
- "A wonderful race through the mind. At times the broken words slow the reader down from otherwise perfect pacing. W a v e s and p i e c e s are good examples of that. Other times it is used very artistically and helps synchronize fluidity. C r a s h is my favorite. You might consider some editing, but being high can create feelings of sudden starts and stops, so it may fit best as is. Keep up the good work."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "Taffy Bullet" by FearlessDragon
