"err.. uhh..yeah.. mm.. well, that was tasty. I love the first and last verse.. intensely passionate. :::OLd" Posted by OLd SouL on "Heat Exhaustion" by Invader Lyn
"I thought this was an interesting line "each kiss a rogue match struck against a rough lip". The ending slapped me. Good stuff. :::OLd" Posted by OLd SouL on "like it's already gone" by Invader Lyn