Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- "no, i read it all. honestly, i think it was pretty solid in flow right through the lines "And morality took a shot gun to the head and no one saw", right after that it devolved into kind of a rant that seemed more focused on shock value. i think if u ended with that first part it would be cooler, or at least kept it a little more subtle. if u r an atheist, why align yourself with the devil? to me, it seems like shock value. anyway, just my thoughts. "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "The End- really need feedback" by Steven86175
