Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- "I liked the way this was constructed and built, but I don't think the closing line quite does this justice. It would almost be better to end it a stanza earlier, because the "sexy body" portion makes it almost seem trite and at odds with the rest. Very interesting piece that set quite the mood all the same. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "The Scarlet Letter" by Angel Plant
- "I like this piece, with its combination of the foreboding and the sexual. Brought to mind the song Possum Kingdom for me. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on " Doom" by Angel Plant