Comments by TropicalSnowstorm

  • "I especially love the line "you were the most beautiful mirror ever made" - that seems to encapsulate the whole of this piece. Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "pallor" by anaksunamun
  • "" His fist against her feels tranquil." - holy cow, that line was casually brutal. I also like the notion of covering the mirrors so death can not find them. Excellent piece! Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "excruciating" by anaksunamun
  • "No one seems to (want to) understand the forces at work in the world outside our moats and walls and charmed cities. Great piece! Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "lividity" by anaksunamun
  • "I love the feel of this piece, very well done! The line "however new the house. warm shadows still move around there" is especially fantastic, and was fun to picture and ponder. Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "scatterer" by anaksunamun
  • "I am tired of you being insulting to the members here. If you have some insightful comments, please share them...but for the most part I have seen you criticize people for their appearance and for presenting things in a creative way. This is particularly obnoxious when you haven't even produced anything you care to post here. "
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "scatterer" by anaksunamun
  • ""remain confused it is another way of hiding." - those are very profound lines. Excellent piece! Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "ξ" by anaksunamun
  • ""I dance with myself so good, then run far away when he isn't looking ." - I love picking through your pieces...very interesting and surreal. : ) Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "mcdonalds coke." by anaksunamun
  • "Wonderful imagery...brought to mind for me the thought of someone ancient, sealed away in the dark, only vaguely aware there is still a present as stray memories drift through their mind. Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "gold." by anaksunamun
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