Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- "Yes, the meter was very effective - so many rhyming pieces can easily devolve into sing-songy disasters. This was very well done - I love the lines "Young man blames the elder,
The wise man has passed away". Look forward to reading more. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "August 9th" by ONEANDLONELY
