Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- ""When you told me that she tasted like fresh cut grass
I thought you had your words mixed up..." This was an outstanding piece, with so many images and experiences tapped into in so few words. Poetry indeed! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "the truth doesn't care" by eidos
- ""this morning we eat breakfast as strangers" - I liked this contrast to "forever". I can feel where you are coming from in this one, and I loved the structure and flow. Great job! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "the sound of standing still." by eidos
