Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- ""Pull me softly and dream me away, wind.
I'm getting hard and cracked,
like pavement, and dull as gray, too." Lovely lines in a lovely piece! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Deep Sight" by dark_sister
- "Nice! I love the lines "back to the family
that chewed and chewed
until you emerged
full of holes
and too eager" - great mental picture from that! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Banishing" by dark_sister
- ""drenched in nonsense but occassionally
wrenching eyes wide open
with painful stabs of truth." - excellent! I wondered how Delphi related to until I got to those lines - very nice! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Delphi" by dark_sister
- "Beautiful piece! My favourite lines are "I give it to her and her cracked teeth.
I give it to her and I give it to me". You capture so much with your words! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "In Passing" by dark_sister
