Comments by Liz
- "Also, you list several clues as to what you were before you "changed." It makes me suspect that you know exactly what happend, and so I wonder why you ask, at the end. If you don't know, tell us more from these clips, and let us guess."
Posted by Liz on "I Was Once Beautiful" by GothicBlack
- "I really liked this poem, the repetions and descriptions make it strong. The last six stanzas started to be redundant, though. I don't think that repetition is as good as repeating the one line. "
Posted by Liz on "I Was Once Beautiful" by GothicBlack
