Comments by jonLyndon
- "Nice. "You can choose a ready guide in some celestial voice / If you choose not to decide, you still have made a choice / You can choose from phantom fears and kindness that can kill / I will choose a path that's clear. I will choose free will!" ~N. Peart. Just thought I'd toss in that lyric from a song your poem reminded me of. I really like your rhyme structure; and of course, the fight of cognitive volition. "And listen not to what I've said" ~Well done."
Posted by jonLyndon on "Free Will" by HeadpatSlut
