Comments by Gray Vision
- "After reading the remix to this piece, I can honestly say this still would have been enough for me at least. Keep up the good work."
Posted by Gray Vision on "Pearls of Tears" by ToxicLove
- "With this piece, I don't have to drain your heart to find what it holds. I'll take your word for it when you say, "Squeeze it between your fingers and, watch my love spill" that right there is enough for me. Great write and thank you for sharing."
Posted by Gray Vision on "Pearls of Tears Remix" by ToxicLove
- "You know, this is the first poem I've had the pleasure of reading in terms of your work. You bled life and emotion into this piece just as you have with your three daughters. Even though time and time again, you find yourself falling two steps backwards, despite your efforts to progress forward, know that you'll have three daughters to lean on, if that helps any. You've shown me allot of what type of person you really are through this piece, "caring, concern and loving..." the traits and an amazing mother, "having patients and understanding" after all as a mother, you would have to have developed this to cope with your daughters, I know because I have a mom to. Please don't give in despite the seemingly receding light at the end of the tunnel, in your efforts to give 100% and receive 0 in return, you?re probably receiving 10 fold by helping someone unknowingly that feels the same way. Thank you so much for sharing and momma, you're appreciated =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "So Weary... Is it time to give up?" by ToxicLove
- "I agree with RubyXero on this one extremely passionate, I felt each line as I roamed the rooms occupying those now empty halls. Great write yet again and thank you for sharing =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Hello My Name is Tammy" by ToxicLove
- "Alot of what you write is raw, heartfelt emotion. I've also come to notice that experience plays a vital part in the process of you writing your poems, which really reflects in the line after line of imagry and emotion. I respect what you're doing on here, sharing works such as this with us, personal indeed. Great write and thank you for sharing =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "...Loves Hand..." by ToxicLove
- "It's crazy the things love can do to a person, and the pain it can cause, no one ever thinks about that aspect of it all just the butterflies and lovedoveness that one feels. You portrayed the aftermath of this woman's pain so clearly in this piece from here, "curling up on the floor, clutching his pillow" to her "quietly counting all the things about him that she will miss." Great write and thank you for sharing =)
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Posted by Gray Vision on "Loves Spell" by ToxicLove
