Comments by Rowan
- "You've captured rage very well. You've taken that outburst of anger to a new level and defined it nicely. I was entranced in every line, many of which are my favorites. That rage is in all of us waiting to break free of the core to wreak havoc upon the weak. I'll be sure to step out of your way when this fury is unleashed. Nice write."
Posted by Rowan on "Rage" by Gray Vision
- "I actually really like this write. It almost reminds me of a rock song for some reason. I bet if you expanded this and put a nice chorus you would have awesome lyrics. As for the concept, I know frustration just gets people so ticked. Pressing those buttons get annoying and you just want to be left alone. I like this write and the style. Write on. Welcome to DP."
Posted by Rowan on "Frustration" by Gray Vision
