Comments by Rowan
- "Awe. Just pure awe. I loved every word. For who am I really? How do I view myself? Hmmm thoughts to ponder. "For you are Wonderful." That made me smile so big. I wasn't expecting that. But that was truly a perfect ending to a wonderful piece :) Thanks for the write Jajang!"
Posted by Rowan on "Wonderful" by jajang829
- "The words seeped into my mind to take me on a runaway train of thoughts. The "freedom" you acquired in the first staza didn't appear to be what it was. As I read every line, you made me feel what you felt. I felt trapped, unsure, roaming down cornered paths and blocked crossroads. I couldn't escape, but then there was the gun, a promise to be free of all the torment. However, the dilema. "To be or not to be?" the assassin or the suicide? You put great emphasis on this part. To be free from your lover's reign and end their life? Or to be free eternally and end yours? The ending took me by surprise I must say. You called your lover both those things for in reality she was the one leading you to destruction therefore killing you, the suicide. Hmmm so many thoughts I have for this piece. I may have to come back and comment again another time. There are so many ways to look at it. Very nice job. Not many pieces make me think as hard this."
Posted by Rowan on "Only Way Out" by jajang829
- "Numb pain, but does it really go away? Or is it a temporary relief that will only come back in time? Nice write jajang. I enjoyed this :) My mom has to take her "happy pills" as well."
Posted by Rowan on "Thorazine" by jajang829
- "We can never truly forgive until we learn to forgive ourselves. Such a nice, elegant, TRUE, write. We hate ourselves for the misdeeds we've committed. Not only that, but in turn begin to hate ourselves what we have wronged. We are at our own judgement. The worse of anyone. This was a lovely write and flowed very well. Write on."
Posted by Rowan on "Bloody Knees" by jajang829
