Comments by Dilated View
- "This was a really interesting piece to read. I get the sense that someone tried so hard to pull someone out of their own self-inflicted, self-insisted disaster and despite those efforts it was blown along with the breeze, carefree but stuck to themselves, leaving those in their wake sad and exhausted. Interesting read, nicely done :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Wonders of" by Jonas Robinson
- "Oh wow I really really enjoyed this. It struck all the right nerves and that last stanza really left me pondering "what comes next?" When it's "night forever" and the world is no longer your oyster, who will create a spark to see what comes? Very nicely done throughout, thank you for sharing!"
Posted by Dilated View on "Where are we?" by Jonas Robinson
- "I found this interesting as a sort of back and forth between love and death. The analogies throughout helped keep the flow going in a way that kept me off balance but on track from line to line. Really cool imagery :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Burn Burn Burn" by Jonas Robinson
