Comments by Dilated View

  • "What an interesting and fresh way to look at a common recurring theme. The idea of pillows as both a physical and metaphoric barrier to the heart and soul of another. And it would seem so easy to move those pillows aside to reach them but, as you question - are they happy enough to want to do this? If so, wouldn't they have? Or do they want to but are lost in their own head, dealing with their own stress that they simply haven't shared as a way to protect you from adding things to your plate? Such a delicate balance needed on these tightropes we walk. A very interesting read, thank you for sharing :)"
    Posted by Dilated View on "Where are you when i drift to dream" by BetaWolfinVA
  • "This is something that I can really relate to at this point in my life. Paying for the mistakes I have made, a vision of where I'd like to be but if I think it in more than a whisper it could evaporate. And as I'm attempting to get there navigating all of the road blocks. And it would be so easy to sink to a different level but for some that would be worse than not achieving the dream. Well put,write on!"
    Posted by Dilated View on "Choosing between Life and Honor" by BetaWolfinVA
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