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Things to Break a Soul, One Poem Lost at a Time
By BetaWolfinVA
How is it that i
should allow my spouse to rip
out parts of my mind
poems deleted press by
press... is stopping her so wrong?
.
some woman's notebooks
getting washed by a boy friend
or spouse is so wrong
but i'm evil because i
won't let my spouse delete stuff?
.
both things break a soul
one poem lost at a time
if my wife is mad
she can write it to tell me
and not tear my broken mind
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Copyright Friday, 19 September 2014 HHMCameron
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On Sunday, September 21, 2014, Magdalena
(615)
wrote:
It is a selfish man who would worry more about his own broken mind than the mind of his spouse that he is breaking, to then blame her for the tearing of his.
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On Sunday, September 21, 2014, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
My current wife didn't break my mind, I thought I was whole again when I met her... and when I married her. She did not break me. Deleting poems isn't even a Band Aid, and hinders my attempts to ... not get worse...
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On Sunday, September 21, 2014, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
"My current wife didn't break my mind" Yes, I got that and did not allude to otherwise. I referred to you blaming her for tearing your broken mind.
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On Sunday, September 21, 2014, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
Deleted effluvia needs to be replaced Dredging what was laid to rest. for a long time I was able to... not... but I was not able to tread water. I've started again, but What she cannot see cannot hurt her. (Members only - insert glyph of cowardice and self hatred)
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On Friday, September 19, 2014, Star
(920) wrote:
This sickens me.
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