Comments by ubiquitoussoul

  • "On Wednesday, September 8, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (476) wrote: I like how you embody something more than human.. How you evolved an emotion into something wild but tame.. As powerful and beautiful as am ocean wave and the receding climb back into it's bed.. I can also visually see a synchronous melody these two art forms create.. The picture is rich ..contrast and vibrancy make it dream like.. A treasure.. The voice of the poem stirred me . Moved me along the current of the words..message..embattled me"
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Within my reach" by A Life Without You
  • "This was amazing..don't make take it any less..An instant favorite..Didn't feel it was a tease..it was just right to me..nothing more needed to be said nothing less..I get such a vivid image here..Darkness..then lids open..An old concrete building..the light.in a hue of gray and blue..shadows bent sharp around windows..Bombs..Hangings..The hidden innocent scared..still face.and the resonating words you repeat over and over again..Feeling of lost hope,despair,solitary..but int the same vein a dark tranquility lined i this final moment..Thanks for the share.."
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Finding an End..." by A Life Without You
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