Comments by ubiquitoussoul

  • "Heartfelt man..more like a stab or a brick sinking to the bottom of your stomach..anyway..that sucks to be the friend..cant say i know the feeling but this was a nice write nonetheless..would make an excellent song"
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Until Then (Pt2)" by soldier
  • "This looks as if spread out on a cookie cutter sheet of a song waiting to be baked..just eat the outcome..not a bad write."
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Until Then " by soldier
  • "Okay your stuff is definitely lyrical..I can hear you singing this over a guitar piece..not bad I've felt this before in a short glimpse of my life where I've felt as if I was slipping on life..there was no grasp but..hang in there..you are still breathing.."
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Still Breathing" by soldier
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