Comments by Ears2hearyou
- "damn..i think i got a fat lip just from
reading it!
wow..you moved us fast and tight,
I felt like I had to hold on to my
chair as you raced us through the room
and threw us into the Cage with you.
I enjoyed your ending too...touch
of humor....I thought to myself
damn...i guess there is something to
a calm and meek life!
lovely writing, very powerful!
you controlled the flow amazingly!
It forced us to journey with you
close to your side. Feeling and tasting
every sensation.
well done!
ears/Seattle
I usually write with a little more
air but you really clung to us
and it was a heck of an adventure!
"
Posted by Ears2hearyou on "Blackout Rumble" by Soldier Of Silence
