"Beautifully written. The rhyme didnt seem forced at all. The last line is stand out for me, delicate but strong in close." Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Jezebel's Treasure" by lovechild
"Some of the best poems I have read have been no more than 4 lines. First poem or not I like the depth and thought left for me to contemplate. Well captured" Posted by Leith Plunkett on "my first poem" by lovechild
