Comments by Scarrzz
- "I like the imagery and the flow, and what a delicious twist at the end that was! * You may want to do a quick proofread/edit, being careful of the your/you're trap. * Was it my imagination only, or were both figures in this dream feminine? Unusual, enjoyable eroticism."
Posted by Scarrzz on "reverie of roses" by slow.burn.star
