Comments by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "Apples, reminds me of sin ( thanks to genesis connotation, then again apple was never mentioned...anyway!) "the cats are fighting I wouldn't seperate them"- this is a crucial line to the poem, i love it.
There are a few typos, but overall I love the title, the body and the ending. Lovely :)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "apples and smiles" by Pureheartless
