Comments by Winter Born
- "very elegant. I am sorry but I cannot wrap my mind around the "audibly condemn the life of a soldier" bit. But a war where no one gets hurt... that I can believe in. Even if you would rather blind yourself to the fact that a war of words is still... a war."
Posted by Winter Born on "i am a slave" by Jonas
- "this raises a sence of emotion and understanding in me that I do not fully understand, and find myself incapable of defining... After reading your write three times the feelings remain, but they are still like trying to hold smoke... I may have to fav this one..."
Posted by Winter Born on "i wrote it because" by Jonas
- "Very good write Jonas. Cuts deep and leaves an indelible mark. Though I am confused by the ending... Is that a call to war I read?"
Posted by Winter Born on "i am a slave" by Jonas